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Tuesday 10 September 2013

The three LittlePig

The Three Little Pig

Once there was the three little pig said to the mother “Good bye mother” the mother gave some money to buy something.

The 1st little pig brought some straw to build his own house she finished her house.So a big fat wolf came to the house and said to the fat pig “Open the door”.The pig said “not from my chinny chin chin”.

The wolf said I will huff and puff and blow your house down.So the wolf blow the house down and the pig run to the other brother.so he run fast as he could so the pig was so tired he had no more engey so the wolf said “Wolf s are fast then pig” so the pig said in my life I don’t want to get eatin so the pig ran fast as he could so he got to the 2nd oldest brothers house.

The 2nd oldest brother was little pit brainy then the 1st brother so the 2nd oldest  brother built a house so the pig saw a man with a stick so the man gave him the stick the 2nd little pig got started. The pig finished his own house. So the pig relax and then the 1st little pig said “Open the door so the”the  2nd oldest brother went to open the door and the 1st brother kissed him on checks and the 2nd brother said “What do you want” “There is a big fat smelly wolf coming to blow your house down”

So the wolf said to the pig “Open the door”.  So the pig said “Not by my harry chinny chin chin” The wolf replied “ I will huff and puff and blow the house down”.

The 3rd oldest brother was brain then the 1st brother  2nd  brother built a house so the pig saw a man with a break so the man gave him the brick the 3rd oldest pig got started. The pig finished his own house. So the pig was going outside to look at the house and then the 1st little pig and 2nd brother said “lets go inside because there is a big mean wolf coming to blow your house down” so the three little pig was scared  because the big mean wolf was already  there.

The big bad wolf said to the three little pig “Little pig little pig  open this door” so the three little pig said to the  wolf “Not from my harry chinny chin chin” so the big bad wolf said to the pig “So I will huff and puff and blow your house down” but the wolf couldn't blow the house down so he went to the top of the roof and saw the chimney so the three little pig was cooking something so the wolf fell down the chimney so the wolf was cooked so the pig was so full that they ate the yummy wolf.

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2 comments:

  1. Hi Hala,

    I liked your story. It was very good, maybe next time you can put more words but that was a very nice piece of work you did. I liked how you changed the colours of the words on every paragraph.

    Keep up the good work Hala.

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  2. Hi Hala,

    I liked your story. It was a very good piece of work. Maybe next time you can put more words but that was a very awesome work. I also liked how you put lots of colours in your draft.

    Keep up the good work.

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